I'd say you're doing good! A lot of the techniques you used felt well executed. The only thing that confused me and felt wrong was the robot Aiming the opposite way of the boy in the fight when he lifts the gun arm. A small detail but it disrupted that lovely fight scene you put a lot of effort into.

Not my kind of thing, but I have to respect each character having their own unique trait to contribute. Fits their personalities and how the plot progresses. The depiction of his yellow belly guilt mixing with his clearly unhinged mental state was really well done. In the end this kind of thing eventually comes around to bite you in the back. Not only his actions but that kind line of work in general. The ending felt appropriate.

C O C K INJURED!

To the point, I like that.

Always here to look out for my fellow Rosalina Lovers.

Oof... Yeah you got me with this one Hooves. One of my favorites from you in a while.